Additionally, please take some time to flesh out your character a bit more. At the moment we don't have much of a sense of her personality. Keep in mind that we're a character-driven site, and as such we're looking for fully realized character concepts with realistic strengths, struggles, flaws, and complexity. What information we do have about what your character is like as a person comes from her Hogwarts days, but she's been out of school for nearly as long as she was at Hogwarts, so please give particular attention to developing her as a young adult. Some of the information we have also seems incomplete. For example, you emphatically describe Luna as odd, but nothing in the app seems to support that she's peculiar.
Finally, please review and edit your application for realism with respect to Luna's career. You've given us fairly little information to go on, but it seems unlikely to us that she'd simply "demand" a writing job at the Daily Prophet without any prior experience, even with the probationary period mentioned, and perhaps especially if there is something about her that is notably strange. Remember, the Prophet is a major newspaper; think the New York Times or the Guardian. Therefore, there would be no shortage of qualified candidates with relevant experience, and aspiring writers would likely face fierce competition while they slowly climb the ladder to getting a position that actually gives them authorship.
You have three days from the time of this post to complete editing. When you're done, just reply below and we'll look at your app again. We hope to have you on site and roleplaying soon!